Ha. I get that a lot for this one. I draw eyes like that in other parts of my work.. for this image, I was mainly trying to get their expressions and body languages across.. so.. that's why I drew them out a bit more!
This is so, so beautiful. I love how the viewer can clearly see the expressions on the two peoples' faces (the girl's expression of delighted, soft surprise is absolutely adorable!). I also really like that the rest of the guests are further back in the image and bathed in shadow--I think that captures that moment when all you can see is the person you love asking you to dance. And all the lights in the tree and in the grass are lovely and give the image a gorgeous, warm glow.
This song immediately popped into my head--reminds me of "Oh My Stars" by Andrew Belle: [link] I can definitely picture two people slow dancing to this song.